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 +======   CHAPTER 2 — Structure That Doesn’t Hold   ======
 +
 +The building wasn’t abandoned.
 +
 +It simply wasn’t used.
 +
 +There was a difference.
 +
 +The lights worked.\\
 +Doors responded.\\
 +Systems were online.
 +
 +But nothing lived there.
 +
 +Night City didn’t forget places. It recycled them, broke them down, built something new on top.
 +
 +This one hadn’t been touched.
 +
 +That was wrong.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Ace didn’t slow. She didn’t check the entrance.
 +
 +The door opened anyway.
 +
 +Recognized.
 +
 +Accepted.
 +
 +That didn’t sit right.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Mai stepped in first, her eyes already moving—not scanning, not searching, but mapping. Lines, distances, relations. The shape of the space before it had time to pretend it was stable.
 +
 +“The layout is inconsistent,” she said.
 +
 +Flat. Immediate.
 +
 +Ace didn’t answer.
 +
 +She didn’t need to.
 +
 +She could feel it.
 +
 +Distances sat just slightly off. Angles refused to settle cleanly. The corridor stretched a fraction too far, then corrected, then slipped again like it hadn’t decided what it was supposed to be.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Shammy paused at the threshold.
 +
 +The air lagged behind her.
 +
 +Then caught up.
 +
 +Wrong order.
 +
 +“It doesn’t settle,” she said quietly. After a beat, more precise: “It keeps adjusting.”
 +
 +Which meant the space wasn’t stable.
 +
 +It was reacting.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Ace stepped forward.
 +
 +The floor held.
 +
 +The walls mostly did.
 +
 +But the distance between them shifted—not in a way the eye could track, but in how the body read the space. Subtle. Wrong.
 +
 +Mai moved ahead, slower now, each step measured.
 +
 +“This is not expansion,” she said.
 +
 +A pause, as she recalibrated what she was seeing.
 +
 +“This is misalignment.”
 +
 +That mattered.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Ace reached the first intersection and stopped just long enough to look.
 +
 +Left.
 +
 +The hallway stretched out long, empty, unchanged—or trying to be.
 +
 +Right.
 +
 +Shorter. Compressed. The proportions wrong in a way that made the eye hesitate.
 +
 +She didn’t choose between them.
 +
 +She moved forward.
 +
 +----
 +
 +The space adjusted.
 +
 +Not abruptly.
 +
 +Just enough to match the decision.
 +
 +That was worse.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Shammy stepped in behind them, the air shifting with her. Pressure gathered, then slipped sideways like it didn’t quite know where it was supposed to settle.
 +
 +“It’s following us,” she said.
 +
 +A beat.
 +
 +“Or… responding.”
 +
 +----
 +
 +Mai didn’t answer immediately.
 +
 +Then:
 +
 +“Yes.”
 +
 +Flat.
 +
 +“It is adjusting to observation.”
 +
 +That locked it in place conceptually, even if the space itself refused to do the same.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Ace didn’t slow. Didn’t hesitate.
 +
 +She kept moving, forcing the space to keep up with her instead of the other way around.
 +
 +It worked.
 +
 +For now.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Until it didn’t.
 +
 +----
 +
 +The next corridor stretched longer than it should have been.
 +
 +Then shorter.
 +
 +Then both, in a way that made distance meaningless for a second too long.
 +
 +Mai stopped.
 +
 +“This is the source radius,” she said.
 +
 +A brief pause, as if confirming it internally.
 +
 +“Further in.”
 +
 +----
 +
 +Of course it was.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Ace stepped past her.
 +
 +Deeper.
 +
 +----
 +
 +The building stopped pretending.
 +
 +Walls drifted slightly off-angle, just enough to break the illusion of straight lines. The floor wasn’t entirely flat anymore—not uneven, but unreliable. Distance lost its consistency, stretching and compressing without warning.
 +
 +And then—
 +
 +the air changed.
 +
 +Sharper.
 +
 +Denser.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Shammy inhaled slowly.
 +
 +It didn’t come out evenly.
 +
 +“There,” she said.
 +
 +Not a direction.
 +
 +A state.
 +
 +----
 +
 +Mai turned just slightly, her eyes narrowing as the pattern finally began to converge into something usable.
 +
 +“Yes,” she said.
 +
 +Flat.
 +
 +“It is close.”
 +
 +----
 +
 +Ace didn’t ask how.
 +
 +She didn’t need to.
 +
 +She stepped forward—
 +
 +and the space shifted.
 +
 +Not to stop her.
 +
 +To accommodate her.
 +
 +----
 +
 +That was the confirmation.
 +
 +----
 +
 +They weren’t moving through the building.
 +
 +The building was moving around them.
 +
 +----
 +
 +And somewhere just ahead—at the point where structure failed completely—
 +
 +something that didn’t belong
 +
 +was holding everything together
 +
 +simply by being
 +
 +in the wrong place.
 +