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| + | They didn’t stop. | ||
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| + | Not after the collapse. | ||
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| + | Not after the confirmation. | ||
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| + | Because stopping implied safety. | ||
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| + | And there wasn’t any. | ||
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| + | Mai moved faster now. | ||
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| + | Not running. | ||
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| + | But no longer measuring every step. | ||
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| + | She had enough data. | ||
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| + | “This isn’t random,” she said. | ||
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| + | Ace kept pace. | ||
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| + | “Good.” | ||
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| + | Shammy’s breathing stayed controlled— | ||
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| + | but the air didn’t. | ||
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| + | Pressure fluctuated. | ||
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| + | Not violently— | ||
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| + | but noticeably. | ||
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| + | “It’s getting denser,” she said. | ||
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| + | V glanced around. | ||
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| + | “…Yeah, welcome to downtown.” | ||
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| + | Mai shook her head. | ||
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| + | “No.” | ||
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| + | A beat. | ||
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| + | “This is convergence.” | ||
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| + | That word again. | ||
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| + | Ace didn’t ask. | ||
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| + | “Direction.” | ||
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| + | Mai didn’t point. | ||
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| + | She adjusted. | ||
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| + | Not toward a place— | ||
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| + | toward alignment. | ||
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| + | The object— | ||
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| + | responded. | ||
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| + | Immediately. | ||
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| + | Not pulling— | ||
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| + | agreeing. | ||
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| + | For a fraction— | ||
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| + | the space ahead— | ||
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| + | tightened. | ||
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| + | Then— | ||
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| + | released. | ||
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| + | “There, | ||
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| + | Ace moved. | ||
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| + | No hesitation. | ||
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| + | They cut through the street— | ||
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| + | not following paths— | ||
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| + | cutting across them. | ||
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| + | Movement resisted. | ||
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| + | People adjusted. | ||
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| + | The city— | ||
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| + | reacted. | ||
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| + | But didn’t stop them. | ||
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| + | It couldn’t. | ||
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| + | The deeper they went— | ||
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| + | the more consistent everything became. | ||
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| + | Buildings aligned more cleanly. | ||
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| + | Distances matched more precisely. | ||
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| + | Movement flowed with less deviation. | ||
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| + | That was wrong. | ||
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| + | Shammy slowed slightly. | ||
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| + | The air— | ||
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| + | tight. | ||
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| + | Not breathing. | ||
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| + | “Holding, | ||
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| + | A beat. | ||
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| + | “Too much.” | ||
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| + | Mai didn’t look at her. | ||
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| + | “Because this is where it resolves.” | ||
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| + | That locked it. | ||
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| + | Ace stepped forward— | ||
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| + | and stopped. | ||
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| + | Not by choice. | ||
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| + | By recognition. | ||
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| + | The street ahead— | ||
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| + | perfect. | ||
| + | |||
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| + | Not visually. | ||
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| + | Structurally. | ||
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| + | Every line— | ||
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| + | every angle— | ||
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| + | every distance— | ||
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| + | aligned. | ||
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| + | Nothing drifted. | ||
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| + | Nothing corrected. | ||
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| + | It didn’t need to. | ||
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| + | “This is the spine,” Mai said. | ||
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| + | Silence. | ||
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| + | V exhaled slowly. | ||
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| + | “…The what.” | ||
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| + | Mai didn’t explain. | ||
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| + | She stepped forward— | ||
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| + | just slightly. | ||
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| + | The space reacted. | ||
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| + | Not by shifting. | ||
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| + | By locking. | ||
| + | |||
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| + | “This is where everything connects, | ||
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| + | Ace nodded once. | ||
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| + | “Then we cut it.” | ||
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| + | “No.” | ||
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| + | Immediate. | ||
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| + | Mai’s voice sharpened. | ||
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| + | “If this collapses—” | ||
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| + | A beat. | ||
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| + | “—the entire system re-resolves.” | ||
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| + | That was worse than before. | ||
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| + | Shammy stepped closer. | ||
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| + | The air— | ||
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| + | |||
| + | resisted. | ||
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| + | Harder this time. | ||
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| + | “It’s not letting us in,” she said. | ||
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| + | Ace stepped forward anyway. | ||
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| + | The resistance— | ||
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| + | increased. | ||
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| + | Not enough to stop her. | ||
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| + | Enough to matter. | ||
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| + | “Good,” she said. | ||
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| + | That meant they were right. | ||
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| + | Mai lifted the object. | ||
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| + | It reacted instantly. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | The spine— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | tightened. | ||
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| + | The alignment— | ||
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| + | sharpened. | ||
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| + | For a fraction— | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | everything— | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | locked. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | Perfect. | ||
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| + | Shammy flinched. | ||
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| + | “It’s completing, | ||
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| + | Ace didn’t stop. | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | “Then we interrupt.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | Mai moved— | ||
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| + | fast— | ||
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| + | into alignment. | ||
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| + | Not breaking— | ||
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| + | overlapping. | ||
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| + | The object— | ||
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| + | shifted— | ||
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| + | not to the center— | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | to the system. | ||
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| + | Shammy pushed— | ||
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| + | harder than before— | ||
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| + | not against the space— | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | against agreement itself. | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
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| + | The air— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | fractured. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | This time— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | it hurt. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | The spine— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | wavered. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Not breaking— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | losing certainty. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | That was enough. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Ace stepped through the resistance— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | not forcing— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ignoring. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | The alignment— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | failed to complete. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | The spine— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | didn’t collapse. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | It flickered. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | For a fraction— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | the perfect structure— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | became— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | imperfect. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Alive again. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Mai lowered the object. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | It resisted— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | stronger now. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Good. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Shammy staggered slightly. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | The air— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | uneven. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Real. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | V exhaled sharply. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “…Okay.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | A beat. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “…I officially hate whatever this is.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Ace didn’t react. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “It’s not done.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Mai nodded. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “No.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | A pause. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “But now we know.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Ace glanced at her. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “Say it.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Mai didn’t hesitate. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “This isn’t trying to take over the city.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | A beat. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “It’s trying to make it agree.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Silence. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Heavy. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Because that— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | was worse. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Shammy closed her eyes briefly. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | The air— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | settled. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | But not comfortably. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “It’s not finished, | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Mai nodded once. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “No.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | A pause. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “It’s just getting closer.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | And somewhere deeper— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | past even this— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | where structure was strongest— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | where agreement was easiest— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | something waited— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | not to grow— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | not to spread— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | but to finish | ||
| + | |||
| + | what everything else | ||
| + | |||
| + | had only begun. | ||
| + | |||
