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| + | No one moved for a moment. | ||
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| + | Not because they didn’t know what to do. | ||
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| + | Because moving implied direction— | ||
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| + | and direction implied agreement. | ||
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| + | The church didn’t offer either. | ||
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| + | Ace stood at the edge of the aisle. | ||
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| + | One step from crossing into something that had already decided it didn’t include her. | ||
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| + | She didn’t hesitate. | ||
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| + | She waited. | ||
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| + | Mai watched the boundary. | ||
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| + | Not where it was— | ||
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| + | but where it wasn’t. | ||
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| + | The line didn’t exist. | ||
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| + | That was the problem. | ||
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| + | “It’s not a surface,” she said. | ||
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| + | Padre didn’t answer. | ||
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| + | He didn’t need to. | ||
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| + | Shammy exhaled slowly. | ||
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| + | The air— | ||
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| + | held. | ||
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| + | Everywhere. | ||
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| + | Except there. | ||
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| + | At the edge— | ||
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| + | it didn’t distribute. | ||
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| + | It didn’t respond. | ||
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| + | “It’s cut off,” she said. | ||
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| + | Mai shook her head slightly. | ||
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| + | “No.” | ||
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| + | A beat. | ||
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| + | “It’s self-contained.” | ||
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| + | That was worse. | ||
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| + | Ace glanced between them. | ||
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| + | “Then we go through it.” | ||
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| + | Not a question. | ||
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| + | Mai didn’t agree. | ||
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| + | Didn’t disagree. | ||
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| + | She stepped closer— | ||
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| + | but not forward. | ||
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| + | Parallel again. | ||
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| + | The distance between her and the aisle— | ||
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| + | shifted. | ||
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| + | Not visibly. | ||
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| + | Just enough. | ||
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| + | “It’s already interacting, | ||
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| + | Ace’s gaze sharpened. | ||
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| + | “How.” | ||
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| + | Mai didn’t look away. | ||
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| + | “It’s correcting around us.” | ||
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| + | That tracked. | ||
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| + | Too well. | ||
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| + | Shammy tilted her head. | ||
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| + | Listening deeper now. | ||
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| + | “It’s not correcting, | ||
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| + | A pause. | ||
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| + | “It’s selecting.” | ||
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| + | Silence. | ||
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| + | That changed the frame. | ||
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| + | Padre opened his eyes. | ||
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| + | “…Selecting what.” | ||
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| + | Shammy didn’t answer immediately. | ||
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| + | Then— | ||
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| + | quietly: | ||
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| + | “What version of this room gets to exist.” | ||
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| + | That landed heavy. | ||
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| + | Mai exhaled slowly. | ||
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| + | “Then it’s not fixed.” | ||
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| + | A beat. | ||
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| + | “It’s resolved.” | ||
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| + | Ace didn’t care about the distinction. | ||
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| + | |||
| + | “Difference.” | ||
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| + | Mai finally looked at her. | ||
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| + | “If it was fixed, we could break it.” | ||
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| + | A beat. | ||
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| + | “If it’s resolved, breaking it creates a new solution.” | ||
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| + | Ace nodded once. | ||
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| + | “Then we don’t break it.” | ||
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| + | That was new. | ||
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| + | Padre watched them carefully. | ||
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| + | “…You’re saying you’re not going to stop it.” | ||
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| + | Mai didn’t answer. | ||
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| + | Shammy did. | ||
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| + | “We can’t stop something that already agrees with itself.” | ||
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| + | That was the closest thing to truth in the room. | ||
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| + | The object in Mai’s hand— | ||
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| + | shifted. | ||
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| + | Not physically. | ||
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| + | Relationally. | ||
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| + | The distance between it— | ||
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| + | and the aisle— | ||
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| + | tightened. | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
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| + | Mai felt it immediately. | ||
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| + | “It’s responding, | ||
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| + | Ace’s gaze snapped to it. | ||
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| + | |||
| + | “Good or bad.” | ||
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| + | Mai didn’t answer right away. | ||
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| + | Because the answer depended on perspective. | ||
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| + | “It’s aligning, | ||
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| + | That was both. | ||
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| + | Shammy stepped closer— | ||
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| + | not to the aisle— | ||
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| + | to Mai. | ||
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| + | The air tightened slightly— | ||
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| + | then held. | ||
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| + | “It recognizes it,” she said. | ||
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| + | Padre’s expression shifted— | ||
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| + | just slightly. | ||
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| + | “…Recognizes what.” | ||
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| + | Mai looked at the object. | ||
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| + | Then at the space. | ||
| + | |||
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| + | “Itself.” | ||
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| + | That was the moment. | ||
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| + | Not a change. | ||
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| + | A decision. | ||
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| + | Ace moved. | ||
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| + | One step. | ||
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| + | Into the aisle. | ||
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| + | The space accepted it. | ||
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| + | Immediately. | ||
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| + | No resistance. | ||
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| + | No delay. | ||
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| + | That was wrong. | ||
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| + | Mai stepped in after her. | ||
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| + | Same result. | ||
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| + | Shammy followed. | ||
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| + | The air— | ||
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| + | did not react. | ||
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| + | Padre did not move. | ||
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| + | He watched them cross a boundary— | ||
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| + | that had taken others. | ||
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| + | Nothing happened. | ||
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| + | That was worse. | ||
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| + | The aisle extended. | ||
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| + | Longer than it had been. | ||
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| + | Or— | ||
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| + | more complete. | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
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| + | The pews on either side— | ||
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| + | aligned more precisely now. | ||
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| + | The walls— | ||
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| + | held tighter. | ||
| + | |||
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| + | The room— | ||
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| + | agreed with itself more. | ||
| + | |||
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| + | Mai stopped. | ||
| + | |||
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| + | “This is wrong,” she said. | ||
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| + | Ace didn’t look back. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | “Explain.” | ||
| + | |||
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| + | Mai’s voice sharpened. | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | “We’re stabilizing it.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | |||
| + | Silence. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | That hadn’t been the plan. | ||
| + | |||
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| + | Shammy felt it too. | ||
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| + | |||
| + | The pressure— | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | was evening out. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | Not because they were fixing it. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Because they were being used. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | “It’s using us as reference, | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | Ace’s hand tightened slightly. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “Then we stop.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | Mai shook her head. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | |||
| + | “No.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | Flat. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | |||
| + | That got Ace’s attention. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | “Why.” | ||
| + | |||
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| + | Mai didn’t hesitate. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “Because it already accounted for us.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | That locked it. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | The object in her hand— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | shifted again. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | This time— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | visibly. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Not shape. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | |||
| + | Placement. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
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| + | For a fraction of a second— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | it was closer to the center— | ||
| + | |||
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| + | |||
| + | than her hand allowed. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Then it snapped back. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | |||
| + | Shammy flinched. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | |||
| + | “It’s not anchored here,” she said. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
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| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Mai nodded once. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “No.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | A beat. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “It’s anchoring here.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | That was the difference. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Ace stepped forward again. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | This time— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | the space didn’t just accept her. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | It adjusted. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | The distance to the front— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | shortened. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | The room— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | tightened. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Padre’s voice came from behind— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | further away than it should have been. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “…You’re changing it.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | Mai didn’t turn. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “No,” she said. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | A beat. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | “It’s deciding.” | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | And for the first time since they had entered— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | the structure didn’t feel wrong. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | It felt— | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | complete. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | ---- | ||
| + | |||
| + | And that was the most dangerous state it could reach. | ||
| + | |||
