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| The fracture didn’t heal. | The fracture didn’t heal. | ||
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| For one terrifying instant, the three-way balance inside Ace tilted. | For one terrifying instant, the three-way balance inside Ace tilted. | ||
| - | The wound pushed: _You are a crack. Let me through._ | + | The wound pushed: _You are a crack. Let me through._ Violet pushed back: No. She’s mine. The Wellspring pressed: _You are a stone I lost._ |
| - | Violet pushed back: No. She’s mine. | + | |
| - | The Wellspring pressed: _You are a stone I lost._ | + | |
| Ace almost lost track of which “you” was which. | Ace almost lost track of which “you” was which. | ||
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| They weren’t copies of faces. They were archetypes. The kind of simplified expressions people drew when they didn’t have time for detail. | They weren’t copies of faces. They were archetypes. The kind of simplified expressions people drew when they didn’t have time for detail. | ||
| - | One smiling. | + | One smiling. One blank. One screaming. |
| - | One blank. | + | |
| - | One screaming. | + | |
| Each oriented toward one of them. | Each oriented toward one of them. | ||
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| Not of seconds—they’d long since stopped matching subjective experience—but of breaths. | Not of seconds—they’d long since stopped matching subjective experience—but of breaths. | ||
| - | In. Out. | + | In. Out. In. Out. |
| - | In. Out. | + | |
| She felt the moment they crossed back through the cavity’s edge. The pressure on her mind dropped from a clawing insistence to a general ache. The glow dimmed slightly. | She felt the moment they crossed back through the cavity’s edge. The pressure on her mind dropped from a clawing insistence to a general ache. The glow dimmed slightly. | ||
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| For now, that was enough. | For now, that was enough. | ||
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